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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-04-17 11:59 PM



following these dream footsteps to home
clean marble eyes
a new slate uncovered
forget me in the wind, to fly with the leaves
ancient stars as our guides
many miles walking alone  
wood whittled plans seem to ignite
focus in and hold the magic

JDW III
4/18/2004

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1 posted 2004-04-18 12:27 PM


I love this! I needed this
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2 posted 2004-04-18 12:35 PM


i too liked this


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3 posted 2004-04-18 12:46 PM


..."wood whittled plans seem to ignite
focus in and hold the magic"...

The entirety was wonderful, and this...brilliant.
TD

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4 posted 2004-04-18 01:00 AM



thank you, thank you, thank you
lol wolfy

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5 posted 2004-04-18 02:35 AM


focus
is elusive
and those who grasp it and tame it,
are profoundly wise.

enjoyed this wolfy, as always

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6 posted 2004-04-18 03:56 AM


love this!
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