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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-04-17 11:16 PM




This

Two love lights glimmer
Eyes shy away, engaging
Feel souls soar, winging

~*~

Inspired by the movie
Forever Young


© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2004-04-17 11:18 PM


Lovely my friend...words definitely fit the picture...

jwesley

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2 posted 2004-04-17 11:22 PM


flying too over here
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3 posted 2004-04-18 02:23 AM


nicely done...and matched perfectly with the picture
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4 posted 2004-04-18 03:57 AM


how beautiful!
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5 posted 2004-04-18 06:41 AM


Karilea
Keep writing like this and you will stay "Forever Young"
enjoyed
------ice
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btw....do you know Bob Dylans song "Forever Young"?

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6 posted 2004-04-18 09:33 AM


oooh, nice, evocative of romantic tenderness

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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7 posted 2004-04-18 09:37 AM


Oh so beautiful Karilea..
Very nicely done..and the pic is perfect!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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8 posted 2004-04-18 09:37 AM


Sweet awareness of youth and love.
Very lovely.
Love, Margherita

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9 posted 2004-04-18 10:43 AM


Beautiful, Karilea.....
the words matching the picture perfectly!!
Hugs, my friend
Ethel

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10 posted 2004-04-18 11:02 AM


I think that movie is one of my two favorite
ones for the joining of lovers.  My second
most favorite one is with Christopher Reeves
where he goes back in time....tissues
could not stop the torrent of my tears...

Yes,  just an old sentimental guy, huh?

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11 posted 2004-04-18 11:47 AM


Hi Sunshine!  "This" is nice.
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12 posted 2004-04-20 01:05 AM


And may it be ever so....you've captured the essence, dear lady! I'm not easily impressed by senryu, but I'm impressed by this.

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13 posted 2004-04-20 01:44 PM



I think what is nice about "This" is that you all left wonderful comments.  Thank you all so much!

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14 posted 2004-04-21 01:39 AM


"This" is what it's all about!   ...jo
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15 posted 2004-04-21 09:03 AM


just a snapshot
with a thousand pictures

speaking of which...
I like yours there..

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16 posted 2004-04-22 09:59 AM


Beautiful pix and a lovely movie too.  Well done.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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17 posted 2004-04-22 03:47 PM


Two love lights glimmer
Eyes shy away, engaging
Feel souls soar, winging

...

blending wings with wind
paired by the sparkle of two
be forever young

...

much enjoyed, Karilea...

regards
sudhir

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18 posted 2004-04-22 03:54 PM


This was cool!
Sunshine
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19 posted 2004-04-23 10:22 AM



*smiling*  Thank you everyone!

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