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0 posted 2004-04-17 09:24 PM




i have this feeling
i can't explain
inside boltz of lightning
strike deep with pain
outside tears
pour like heavy rain
i hope this storm
will soon pass
i always thought
forever, we'd last
i still have this feeling
deep inside
love for you
i can not hide
it's forever
it will always stay
in my heart
each and every day
just once i'd wish
you'd open the door
so i could feel you love
just once more
it's time to open
and talk to me
don't be afraid
i'm not an enemy
i need to see the truth
and hear honesty
to mend my heart
have some peace of mind,finally
i love you dale
but there's another
that's why my love
you shoved,for your own cover
what hurts most
is all you've done
now pack it up
with your lies, she won
i've worked so hard for this marriage
this family
you worked so hard against
how can that be?
let me leave with
some peace and dignity
for once i deserve
your total honesty
i can deall with the truth
not lies or games
please accept the truth
stop this unfair pain
we've been together
allot of years
we've shared laughter
we have even shared tears
every time i am allowed
to feel at home
you shut me out
no love, left all alone
i am not leaving
because i don't love you
i am leaving
because of the abuse you do
i accepted you
and much more
sorry you couldn't
only locked your door


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1 posted 2004-04-18 02:13 AM


this aches, it cries on the page...
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2 posted 2004-04-18 04:01 AM


the pain will fade...I promise
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3 posted 2004-04-18 10:06 AM


I feel real sad for you.
Margherita
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4 posted 2004-04-18 10:11 AM


You release your deep pain through these words of sadness. Powerful words, that hurt.

Wishing you to open new doors.
Love, Margherita

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5 posted 2004-04-18 11:36 AM


Writing like this is good way to work toward your healing.  And you will heal, over time.  hugs....~K~
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6 posted 2004-04-18 11:42 AM


thankyou for your support


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7 posted 2004-04-18 11:59 AM


Sad.
Juju

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8 posted 2004-04-19 01:21 PM


Life’s emotions.  I guess that is what life means; being with other personalities.  Some we understand and delight in happiness, others we become the misery of the very thought of life itself.

JL

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9 posted 2004-04-19 09:15 PM


full of emotion and pain... wow.
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