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Oh Sping Breeze |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
The tender blossoms |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...how beautiful..with just the right hint of sadness. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love your short ones! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hmmm, perfection at it's best, such a subtle beauty...this!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
The tender blossoms are torn away so quickly oh spring breeze- will you sweep away her heart across this great divide? on one branch birth and death live side to side the tree stands thru all |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Yes, very nice! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- On one branch life and death sit side by side the blossoms are falling fast as they dress winter's worn branches they are silenced yet the tree stands for the duration; a mother cradles a child inside destined to be stillborn how can she both hold and detach from her tender heart as while she waits? for a coworker going thru an ectopic pregnancy |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
spring is a gentle courier and those sweet petals arent lost in vain...they are gathering knowlege of the plains...and taking in the beauty the mother tree will never see  and i, sit here, taking in the beauty of you... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
spring is a gentle courier and those sweet petals arent lost in vain...they are gathering knowlege of the plains...and taking in the beauty the mother tree will never see and i, sit here, taking in the beauty of you... Dawn, this is just beautidul, mysttical, heartfelt.....Thank you so much.....  ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
the blossoms are falling fast as they dress winter's worn branches they are silenced Amazing.....where you have taken this one... long awaited, |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This is so literal and yet so metaphorical, as well. Beautifully penned, choshi! It reminds me of the feeling I have when the wind steals away the blossoms of my mock orange, and their fragrance with them. Then scatters them helter-skelter to wither on the ground where they lie. I always mourn their loss for a time. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
This is so literal and yet so metaphorical, as well. Beautifully penned, choshi! Thank you VAS..... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Oh my...how beautiful..with just the right hint of sadness. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Thank you Nancy, yes, just a hint.....hugs back ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
I love your short ones! Thank you Dixie, they are my fave's too...~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Hmmm, perfection at it's best, such a subtle beauty...this!! Thank you Blue,,,, ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Yes, very nice! Thank you Grover..... ~P |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
love in its deepest aray...like millions of lights of diamonds sparkling off the ocean waves |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
love in its deepest aray...like millions of lights of diamonds sparkling off the ocean waves What a beautiful image you describe, Lee....Thank you ~P |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Like this...James Glad....Thank you |
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