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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
does the record of my existence continually skip a beat, jump a line? do I need to “modern it up” a bit c.d. it, dvd it? how might I keep the hiccoughs from forming, from obliterating the rhyme, the scheme, the plot of my destiny? what translucent arc paints my backdrop, trims my blessings, coats my promises with serenity? what beauty brings the “Monet” style of vision to the reality of my world? is there not some form of effervescence in the blurring? must clarity erase the softness with its hard edges? ©April 17, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS Clarity can also paint soft edges. Well done, enjoyed |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
VAS, Sometimes; Nope; Forge ahead; HOPE; Dusty glasses; Yes, No. I could not resist...thank you for the read. INclan |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you, Both! And Inclan...I must copy your replies and paste them with the copy of my poem in my folder. Perfect responses, surely!  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
An interesting poem. I really enjoyed this delightful read!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love the concept of this one I'm usually good at titles but I"m no help on this...sorry |
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