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EverRuss
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0 posted 2004-04-16 10:43 PM



The cool breeze, the stars
still im sitting far from you.
The waiting in the day,
the words i couldn't say to you, to you
You got me hanging on, you've left me hanging on
and you're feelin

Why do you make me sleepy now
Too tired to love me
Too tired to hold my hand
Why are you lonely now
Too tired to love me
Too tired to hold my hand

If my poems could talk they would mean more than the words

Russell

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1 posted 2004-04-16 11:51 PM


this would have sounded great with some music enjoyed
iliana
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2 posted 2004-04-17 12:18 PM


EverRuss, I heard music with it, too.
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3 posted 2004-04-17 04:54 AM


I feel like that too sometimes
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