was that my heart that stopped..

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Open Poetry #32

was that my heart that stopped..

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-04-16 08:35 PM

was that my heart that stopped
i feel like i can't breathe.

i'm fine

red rimmed eyelids.

whisper

remember this..
remember this feeling everytime you smile,
everytime you breathe..
remember your tears
remember this feeling..

i can't forget.

did you have to be so cruel
say you love me,
let the words burn through your mouth
lies are like acid for your soul..

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-04-16 08:37 PM

A lightning strike to the heart with it's brand.
TD

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2004-04-16 09:00 PM

sad, but well depicted.
Sade

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2004-04-16 09:20 PM

yes the cruelest lie of all that one for sure

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2004-04-16 09:40 PM

lies don't taste good and they are hard to swallow. my man does nothing but lie, i can get over anything, and understand it, but lies, you can't deal with lies, i enjoyed reading this. thanks for sharing

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-04-16 10:13 PM

What a very stunning lasts line, and so true!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-04-17 01:11 PM

sigh...good piece...much enjoyed

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