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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Somehow the miles find us Scooped up in broth of moonlight My hearing seems improved The touch upon my skin Your wandering mind Just a thought of me within Fine mists just simple prayer Feathered fingers light my hair Balk you would and smile Possessed perhaps by linger As I paint you with my dreams Soft the brush…upon impatient lands Yet you are always patient with me Gaping at the cartwheels Lips that seem to search for words Against my cheek, drawn close and full Waiting in the wish to speak The borders lined with buds Barely clear your silhouette Not shade or shadow But sable to my touch That creed of freedom roams Along the winsome catacombs My hand was carved to yours Copyright Kkh 4/16/04 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...  and you never disappoint.  I was reading and thinking how familiar this seemed when I realized that the images reminded me of a favored recurring dream I have...um, only there's a cypress tree in mine.  Thanks again, for the graces. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
astonishing write! She's right you know-you never disappoint sade |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kathleen...once again...B E A U T I F U L . Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Along the winsome catacombs My hand was carved to yours but of course it was........ a perfect ending to a beautiful heartsong |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wow, I am speechless! ! ! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I knew this would be good just by the title |
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sean_krazy Junior Member
since 2002-09-14
Posts 33 |
hmm....u have a style similar to mine... sean |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I have to echo the above ahhhhhhh....simply lovely |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow. Nice, real nice. JL |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Waiting in the wish to speak The borders lined with buds Barely clear your silhouette Not shade or shadow But sable to my touch That creed of freedom roams Along the winsome catacombs My hand was carved to yours Oh, I love your writing, Kathleen. It's smooth as silk.  Hugs,Ethel |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
a gift this day to me with haze of rain laid upon my breath to feast your words, it gives me rest to know that there are others who, for want of words give gifts to you.. thank you. SG |
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