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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Coconuts Don't mean to create a panic or cause a fuss but last night me and my girlfriend were relaxing on the shores of Waikiki and a spaceship landed in the water right in front of us. In what seemed like only a moment two creatures stood before us on the sand. They spoke to us in a language that neither of us could understand. I offered one a coke and he drank it in one gulp and then he threw the empty can on the sand. That made me mad so I chased him up a coconut tree. He made it to the top and he started throwing coconuts down at me. I thought that I was under a coconut attack, until his friend started grabbing coconuts and putting them in a big sack. Seems they only wanted coconuts, this was not a threatening alien invasion, it was more like an amusing situation. They picked all they wanted and headed back to their ship. Seemed like they took enough coconuts to fill two starships. We waved Aloha and said we hope you've enjoyed your trip. We thought we heard them say Maholo as they were about to depart. When they blasted off they waved goodbye with green fingertips that glow in the dark. JamesLee April15 2004 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Enjoyed the whimsy, James... "Maholo"? Is that thank you? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a trip! Or, rather I should say, what a visit! LOL!  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Tee Hee, how fun  Susan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cute one |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very enjoyble read! You certainly have displayed "going coconuts" well! hahahahaha Thanks for the fun! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
aloha and mahalo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank each one of you...and I'll try to spell mahalo right this time...James |
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