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Ocular Moon |
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freehode New Member
since 2003-09-29
Posts 9 |
One count of reliance To dilate the moon’s eye Owns lashes of midnight blue Orion pierces the lunar lids Lids of shadow and cloudy palls Lids of sandman rainfalls Chances are the farmhand recalls Outstretching his son to the heavens He said, “Son, let the moon’s eye Be your anchor Let it show the way to higher dreams true.” If one thing is learned on this journey If one thing remains right The moon’s eye is always there As that beacon of time and beacon of care A beacon for the large, a beacon for small A vision for one, a vision for all |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Yes, yes she is..always watching over us  very nice |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nicely done. Enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes nice rendition |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to PIP, freehode! Enjoyed your poem and look forward to reading more. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
o this is good! |
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