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Lost Amongst the Breadcrumbs |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DawnDawnDawnDawnDawn~ I am overwhelmed with the poignant beauty of this piece~ STUNNING it is~ You've pushed the poetic envelope and sealed it with loving thoughts~  Elegantly magnificient ! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dawn you have just written alot of what I feel all to often. Gawd this was good! Hugs.  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautifully put  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Even the way you have etched this brings to the heart a golden glow. TD |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, Dawn,.......beautiful....beautiful!! Hugs to you sweet lady. Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lovely, tender poem, Dawn. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You are a writer with amazing talent Dawn. Loving this keeper. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow, an incredibly touching poem. Love the graphic as well. Can't wait for the next one Dawn  Maree. Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
"I can only measure loss of tear drops counting" Where's a hanky when you need it? Again, a very meaningful and excellent poem. Sade |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love the way you think Lady.... Beautiful write, jwesley |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunning! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
My heart was touched. Susan |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Thank you everyone! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
muted, I just wanted you to know i made changes in the one i posted for you. I left a note for you on Forever Green and Risky. "as silence sits as sediment" You have such a way with images!!! Sadie |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"How long must the shadows grow ....." An excellent piece of art, dear Dawn. Love, Margherita |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
Beautifully written Dawn |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Lovely! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very nice.... Thank you.. Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
deeply moving and touching.... ~~**~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have few words to describe how this makes me feel... very moving write, Dawn M |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
An excellent presentation, Dawn! |
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