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OHMMM
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OHMMM |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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What shall I moan or grieve? For this voyage at sea broadens every day… Every free road under west-flowing trade winds Suggesting that I haven’t the slightest concept Of soft rainfall in gentle pages of competence Describing A world just outside the gentle breeze of your mind Warming your firmament caressing thoughts Encountering the awesome atmosphere of the bliss of nature Singing like formations of dolphins playing in the ocean With happy eyes and smiling faces, to the tune of come along Sail with us…. Nature…a salon of golden moons rising in the horizon Where navigational lights recognize our curious boat Silvery sea, it’s ever changing patterns circle and rise around us Assembling a profile of some wide entrance through a dense fog Knowing, that on the other side, is a magical moment Perhaps the one magical moment and only one! Comradeship of golden hair, promising some supernatural Escape towards moments of bliss…where times stops and you barely Need to breathe…but you hear a sound of quiet you’ve never encountered Before, almost like God whispering in your ear, through premonition Sounds of waves lapping against the boat, rocking you like a child On a wooden rocking horse, slowly…softly, gentle clear whooshing sounds And you simply drift…drift…driven by nothing But a sense of thoughts…the present whitecaps Dancing a lullaby like a graceful swan of Northern lights Mystical interplay of subdued quiet waters Touching the last sliver of sunset dripping below the horizon Following spring and summer everywhere With Orca off our bow, leading 15-20 knots downwind We discover the temple of some elaborate prayer which I have yet to understand but have most definitely heard The heart of the lagoon of unequaled ingenious and innovative Design of boundless diversity and precarious balance Unlocking the most remote and beautiful paradise in your mind What shall I moan or grieve? For this voyage at sea broadens every day…ohmmmmm |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very descriptive, sounds beautiful  I'll chant with you "OMMMMMM" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ A delight to walk through your word garden. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
An enchanting voyage in this very delightful write. Very relaxing read. Thanks for the imagery. JL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the imagery is fantastic here! |
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