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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2004-04-16 07:32 AM


Your voice paints similes musical
Caressing the nakedness of my mind
With wings, with wings, stealing my soul
Together eyes lock images, affectionate perfume
Lingering silent moments, deeply penetrating stare
Burns a sacred dance with a sparkle of radiance
That would be appreciation centrally harmonic
Hearing for the first time, sea music
Like feathers we float on a summer breeze
Passionate reflections glimmer melodies
We feel night draw us profoundly in
Motionless, I feel your thoughts
Floating like fragile birds in a bubble
We are the scent of blossoms
Eternal softness, your pulse draws my breath
Where Orion is fully risen in a cove of
My every being becomes words of a rivulet
Convincing me that life is worth claiming
We break through into a world where only our
Minds may follow….
With great wings bearing us to a watercourse
Hills passing underneath, effortless and simple
Great bows of ribbon gathered like a spray of roses
We are the first touch of some unity of power
Our worn faces turn to porcelain fair, yellow moon beams
Whistle and capture moments, forgetting what was
We are what God suggested we should be
Warmth of mind and heart, where all simple wishes
Become the greatest part of who we are
Growing and crowding the sky…our sky…our time
Shaping and filling the clothes of dreams
In front of a hearth of corn, falling by luminous white
Shoulders, there, and always I be haply in your arms
Where the Fire of God’s daylight burns
With every degree of tenderness

Written for All Couples Throughout the World
Love the Best that you are Given!


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-04-16 07:51 AM


LeeJ
Yes that is the best policy, Good morning dear.

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-04-16 10:55 AM


Such good advice from a passionate poet.  Great write Lee J.

JL   


Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
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3 posted 2004-04-16 11:44 AM


*sigh* yes...you have put it perfectly...If only more could hear the message...

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-04-17 04:27 AM


I envy your outlook sometimes Lee
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5 posted 2004-04-18 01:45 AM


gorgeous, optimistic, full of hope and life and love!
very much enjoyed

ice
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since 2003-05-17
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6 posted 2004-04-18 06:22 AM


LeeJ
The title says it all, well not quite...the body of the poem has the flesh that stirs hungry emotions. Desire and affection all in one vessel....enjoyed this immensely....
------ice
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