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PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24
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0 posted 2004-04-15 06:52 PM



Oh to the lover's act, I remember well;
that has long resided the hands of time-
yet still to this heart will forever dwell,
as this heart beats for the loving crime.

The moon shown so lightly upon thy face,
as the cool crips breeze fell to thy lips-
it were true of time, that love doth erase,
as the moon was silhouetted, by our eclipse.

Such a magical realm hath first appeared,
as those crimson lips first fell to mine,
oh and how all those thoughts were revered,
as our two bodies were molded to love's design!

Such a lasting kiss, time merely endured,
yet its time, might as well lasted eternity,
for such an act, this heart to love was lured-
tho' love's lustful desire fades too quickly!

© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-04-15 07:34 PM


Very nice!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2004-04-15 07:50 PM


Lovely...James
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-04-16 03:43 AM


indeed it does

well written!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2004-04-16 07:46 AM


yes sadly it does that.
but is it better to have not lusted and received at all? i think not
carpe diem, thats all we got

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
5 posted 2004-04-16 09:05 AM


It sure can be fleeting !!

Hope

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