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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-04-15 01:45 PM


Nothing ever seems to be
enough.

We are endless in the cutting sweep of
our appetite.

Hunger is the nature of
flesh -

And we are starved for union.

Perhaps this could be
enough...

To feed only of ourselves in a
holy feast of pleasure.

Or this...

To be filled in a soulful kiss of
met desire.

This...

To fast in the distance of a touch...whetting our
hunger in a slow burn towards each
other.

Yes...this.

This would be enough.
© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-04-15 01:55 PM

pure art!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-04-15 01:56 PM

Gawd..this is so very beautiful Eric!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Martie
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3 posted 2004-04-15 01:59 PM

Ericc

Yes...this.

This would be enough. !
Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-04-15 02:00 PM


Nah...
not when it's this smooth...

and light, and lovely...
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2004-04-15 02:10 PM

WOW!!!!
HopeS
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6 posted 2004-04-15 02:16 PM

wonderfully penned
yessssss!!!
Hope
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7 posted 2004-04-15 05:04 PM

You have convinced this avarice soul! lol

I like how you think! ~ and write!


EA
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8 posted 2004-04-15 05:49 PM

this was beautifull i really enjoyed reading this one thanks  :loveya"
            


passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-04-16 04:07 AM

I love the way you write of love
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10 posted 2004-04-16 09:10 AM

lovely Ericc~

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~
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Gaia
11 posted 2004-04-16 10:53 AM

loved this, so I touched the screen to feel the real of the thought
loner187
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12 posted 2004-04-16 11:21 AM

this is beautiful, lovely! pure magic and pleasure to read

The first step to recovery is to admit your addiction. So, here it is:

I, Amanda Barmash, am addicted to Ben Harper.
JL
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13 posted 2004-04-16 11:23 AM

Beautiful poetry!
JL

Startime55
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14 posted 2004-04-16 11:24 AM

WOW!!! It is never enough when the words are so beautiful...Magnificent...
Margherita
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Eternity
15 posted 2004-04-16 09:05 PM

I can never get enough of you, dear Eric.

You are beauty and wisdom, your poetry is of outstanding quality .....

*
*

One by one
I take your words
to fill my hands
with silky rose petals
of enticing fragrance

will this be enough
to meet my desire
of inhaling love
with every breath?

*
*

.... and as it is already April 17th here ...HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!
ENJOY YOUR SPECIAL DAY AND LET LOVE FLOW INTO YOUR HEART AND SAVOUR IT!

I love you. Margherita




iliana
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16 posted 2004-04-16 10:47 PM

Ericc, here it is your birthday and you are the one giving gifts!  Thanks for this wonderful piece of writing!  
Sadelite
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17 posted 2004-04-16 10:53 PM

This is perfection in thought and presentation.  I enjoyed it very, very much and would like to catalog it for future.  Thank you for sharing this gem with us.
          Sade
Margherita
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Eternity
18 posted 2004-04-17 06:59 AM

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU POET OF LOVE AND LIGHT!

I love you.
Margherita
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19 posted 2004-04-17 08:19 AM


Happy Birthday, Eric!
hoot_owl_rn
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20 posted 2004-04-17 09:20 AM

Yes...perhaps this indeed would be enough Wistful lines that scroll the blue pages here.

oh, let me add my wishes for a happy birthday to the others
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21 posted 2004-04-17 09:27 AM


Happy Birthday, Mr Poet of loving thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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ThisDiamond
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22 posted 2004-04-17 02:54 PM

HEY...Happy Birthday.

This is incredible, no matter how many times you read it...hehe

TD
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23 posted 2004-04-17 05:11 PM

We are endless in the cutting sweep of
our appetite.

Too true....Love your poetry Ericc~
Happy Birthday to you, poet Sir~
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24 posted 2004-04-17 05:40 PM

Very, very beautiful and romantic!!
You know that I love it!!

Oh, and I hear it's your birthday....
I hope that you have a very Happy Birthday, Eric!!
Heart Hugs,
Ethel
wordwizard
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on the way to next world
25 posted 2004-04-17 07:53 PM

enough is not enough, is it? Good approach
Juju
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26 posted 2004-04-17 10:18 PM

Good poetry makes me happy
Kaoru
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27 posted 2004-04-19 02:47 AM

Ericc, this is amazing.. verily.
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