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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-04-15 12:04 PM


In the cheekbones of words
Thrives city buses with sneakers
Driving lungs with liberty
The wonder of shaped silhouettes
Filling my mind’s fervent eyes
Historical vacuums jump out shouting
          SURPRISE

Self-propelled opals
Spinning, weaving, flying high
Consent melts deeply into my arms
Like the first whim of a waterfall
Heaven’s fingers grips the sky
Wind sighs sweep across the unknown
Like beauty hanging in the evening sky
Elegant smiles sweetly expressed
Melting a portion of cherished heart
Considering the best part of the soul of sea
               Infusion of presence of mind

Enrichments calling out across the moon’s surface
In the cheekbone of words….
There shall we meet…sailing chanting breezes
Speaking boundless spirits
Within the compassionate song of hills
Dancing red fire flames in the night
Words of nature, leaping like tiny fireflies
Magic, beating, dancing alive…oh the compassion
The swift seething eyes of voice
Foaming surf-line kissing morning beaches
Fragrance of moon’s light
Looking down, upon dew driven rivers
Purring a tune softly to wildflowers
Where humming birds meet, trading nectar
Louder sweet and with movement
Like a newborn fawn, within it’s green lagoon
Standing for the first time, naked yet unafraid
Magnificent wings of eagle, ventures to the next forest
All helping themselves, helping others…words
Puff their cheekbones to speak again

© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2004-04-15 12:11 PM


Very sweet indeed!  
This is a wonderful write Lee J.  Love the line:
“Foaming surf-line kissing morning beaches.”

I can hear the seagulls singing and feel a warm sun rising.  Very stunning write girl!
JL



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2004-04-15 07:59 PM


Enjoyed...James
Grover
Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
3 posted 2004-04-22 05:13 PM


Truly elegant!
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-04-22 05:29 PM


Sweeeeet!!  Love it Lee!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
5 posted 2004-04-22 10:59 PM


Truly sweet fundamentals!  I went flying with you on this one.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2004-04-23 02:31 AM


stunning!
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