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Your Regrets
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Your Regrets |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Your Regrets You, all boyish charm, charismatic dazzle, inwardly, your motto being, live for today tomorrow will take care of us. It did not work out quite that way. Philandering swings closed so many doors… are regrets yours, now, knowing you took me on with catch phrases ~ only to watch me leave you alone? Yes, it is true, I do ponder a question of does he live? only when eyeing your seed; funny, how transplants work so well in foreign soil… If you hear it on the wind, I do not hate you any more… it was too close to love. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A lightning strike! Vivacious. Hugs, TD |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Sunshine, This is very moving. keep writing. ~Laura~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"If you hear it on the wind, I do not hate you any more… it was too close to love" OMG!! Speechless here.. Hugging you tight....Sis. To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gah! Speechless, here! The venom is sweet and the poison somehow brings life before death. I do love this, and I'm saving it. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Sounds like you put this note in a bottle and tossed it out to sea. Great write! JL  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow ! Your writing always amazes me. hugs, Chris |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea "If you hear it on the wind, I do not hate you any more…" I feel healing in these words that bite...and the beginning of forgiving.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mama K, if you've read any of my poems, you know this one hits home like a silent tornado and leaves me with no words |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
wow wow....whew, thats a home run! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Karilea, I think we must have known the same man! I was married to the one I don't hate anymore for 9 years and do not know where he is and whether he is alive or dead. That was a long time ago. Enjoyed your lovely writing and really do so identify with it. .......jo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You are so magic with words. Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One of my favorites...lovely...James |
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