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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2004-04-15 07:57 AM


Mystic giving another glance
Hypnotic wayward challenge
Guiding an exhilarating innocence
Bonding gravity to assurance
Remarkable beauteous composite
Articulation of the human soul
Exploring deeply textured patterns
Like a giant sea out of control
We’re humans
Of some working class element
Suggesting mythical agents at trade
Ambitious novel seeking thriller’s face
Tangled in a heightening web
Quality of rest, we unknowingly pave
Feelings, appeal, and even flow
I’m disjointed yet find absolute scenery
Some kind of profound human condition
Away from any thing
We’ve ever known or dreamed
Is it possible, that we overlook?
An impressive factor we so limit in our roles
Walking right there with us every single moment
Clearly in the background but quit present & factual
Pure genius and metaphoric at best
Interrupted history chewing excitable substance
Reddish long haired belief of something firm
Through the ages, and at times nonsensical
Acting out what was done before
Like an entity, thinking out our next move
Blowing us away, into year upon year
Powerful elements…projecting experience near
Who is this mystery keeper of the soul?
This overall imagination running bold
Like a novelistic teaching our mind’s eye
An interesting premise, directing things of life

Atoms thinking our next turn
Where, when and how…we are and always will be
The product results of our parents, those before them
And so on…what one generation accomplishes, boats another
What does not, shall suffer….
Every thought pattern, every wave of joy
Sends a message to this guy, mirroring our tomorrows



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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2004-04-15 10:43 AM


Fantastic!  DNA, it is amazing.
JL
Ditto


Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2004-04-15 10:50 AM


Oh, so true. Unfortunatly there are a few genetic links missing down some lines!

I love how you pour your thoughts on paper!
Always worth the read!

Have a glorious day, lovely Lee!

EA


Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2004-04-15 10:57 AM


LeeJ
We all hope someone is keeping score. LOL
Enjoyed

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-04-15 01:03 PM


another thinker here
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