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How it feels.
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How it feels. |
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 86
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The sun is peeking through from behind the curtains Caressing our bodies... Creating an unbelievable warm sensation Your arm is draped over me I can hear your heart beat gently As I put my ear against your chest We look so good together, Lying here together in this bed Feeling like this will never end... You wake up, lean over me and smile Good-mornings are exchanged You move closer Your lips touch mine And this moment freezes in time And that’s fine Because right now... All I feel is happiness inside. Now only if this was real I would know how it feels To be loved. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
...sometimes it feels so good to be loved... enjoyed this  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...thanks for the reminder |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yea thanks for reminding me what i miss and what it feels like |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
It should be real. Well written! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...all things are possible...James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
just needed to feel it again thanks |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed this poem. Very well written......  Hugs, Ethel |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Would be good if it could feel that way each and everyday Hope |
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