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Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-04-14 03:14 PM

The whispers of your words make me cry,
So here I lay and silently sigh.
If I knew then what I do now,
On bended knee I mercyfully bow.
I should have seen it before,
Nothing more than you I adore.
A memory of such beauty and grace,
Makes my heart begin to race.
Slap me in my mouth I deserve it,
Into the wrong fruits I've bit.
Should have seen it coming,
Your name my heart is drumming...

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2004-04-14 03:16 PM

awwww
this is so thoughtful

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

2 posted 2004-04-14 03:19 PM

thanks, its really for two people and i couldnt write two seperate things cuz it wouldnt have been right...its for my mommy =) and for my baby =) two most important girls in my life

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-04-14 04:09 PM

So very lovely Kyle...much enjoyed!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

4 posted 2004-04-14 07:32 PM

aaww

I like this

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-04-15 03:13 AM

you got it bad

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

6 posted 2004-04-15 03:17 AM

sweet sweet sweet

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-04-15 03:19 AM

SFH -- this was a great write -- hope she forgives........ jo

vega
Junior Member

since 2004-04-12

Posts 24
wherever I lay my hat.

8 posted 2004-04-15 06:33 AM

Beautiful, words that reach inside and touch the heart, Take care...

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

9 posted 2004-04-15 11:52 AM

Andrew...you made me cry...

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2004-04-15 07:46 PM

beautifull they are so lucky

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