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pammy
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0 posted 2004-04-13 09:35 PM


I sit here now ashamed and broken,
I didnt know you could say such terrible things,
But my actions have been stupid,
and i guess that i deserved it,
Now all i can do is mend my ways.

You were there with love and devotion,
You told me i saved your life.
That you loved me so much,
and that that would always stay the same,
But now im the one what has changed.

i changed for the worst and aacted so unreal,
You couldn't understand why I'd hide my natural appeal.
But i thought that i had to,
to stay safe and wanted.
But by acting this way i almost lost those who truely wanted "me"

Im sorry for my mistakes,
I can not take them back,
but i can say I've learned from them.
I've learned to do what is truely "me"
and not to take youfor granted.
I've found out that you loved me before i cahnged,
and through all of this you love me still.

~*Pammy*~
"Scarred from the past, longing for the future,and fearing the present"

© Copyright 2004 Pamela Elizabeth! - All Rights Reserved
Sadelite
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1 posted 2004-04-13 10:33 PM


Well said!  It's wonderful when we meet people who care for us unconditionally.  It's sounds like you have met such a person, and appreciate that person.  I enjoyed your poem.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-04-14 02:57 AM


heartfelt write
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3 posted 2004-04-14 03:00 AM


Sounds like an unconditional love to me.
Yes, it is a very real feeling write.

HopeS
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4 posted 2004-04-14 04:37 AM


Wonderful heartfelt realization

Hope

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