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PazSqual Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 71 |
Someday I no longer wait on Someday For it is a day that doesn't always come I have gotten used to this solitude In its darkness I've grow totally numb Being alone isn't all that bad It was the loneliness Which once made me feel sad I do not know what tomorrow will bring And by not waiting on Someday I will not feel the sting |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's when you stop waiting for it, that it finds you  enjoyed this |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
It is true that being alone and being lonley are two different states of being. And letting go of Someday will truly gift you today. Nice write. Susan |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nicely written. TD |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Had to come back and tell you, that you craft well... Your write was very good because it brought emotions in your reader... The attainment of numb so as not to feel lonely does not sound like the happiness a human being deserves. To reach someone at that depth is an indication of real talent. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write...much enjoyed |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I do not know what tomorrow will bring And by not waiting on Someday I will not feel the sting I like this |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Great write! |
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