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PassionatelyRomantic
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0 posted 2004-04-13 04:33 PM


Oh why dost love tempt thee-
with such an unloving desire;
that by grace these eyes can see,
yet is such, I can't acquire?

For love is to a distant star,
as this heart, is to a dreamer-
who searches for passion so very far,
yet in vanity he must endure.

For love forever, may grace his eyes,
yet to a dreamer, love has never felt,
that shown so brightly 'neath these skies,
nor in this heart, has never dwelt!

© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2004-04-13 05:30 PM


Very beautiful, truly romantic write.
Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2004-04-13 06:25 PM


Very nice - enjoyed. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-04-13 08:10 PM


Lush...James
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4 posted 2004-04-14 02:52 AM


very passionate!
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5 posted 2004-04-14 02:55 AM


this hopeless romantic enjoyed this one.

HopeS
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6 posted 2004-04-14 03:04 AM


I an both a dreamer and hopelessly romantic , so I enjoyed this immensely

Hope

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