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WindSong
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0 posted 2004-04-13 04:26 PM


I've been kind of 'absent' from here lately...I had a lot to take care of and finally was able to. This is about a recent boyfriend. I wrote this for him way back in October. We broke up last night. (4/12)
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I'd give my life for you
Everything I own I'd give up for you
Radiation of love blowing your way
For you, I would die
For you, I'd change
Never letting go of anything I have for you
Only collecting more love and more happiness
Don't forget me when I leave, but remember
For you, I'll be here forever
for one reason,
I love you.

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After 7 1/2 months, it proved false. I don't love him...and that was a problem, among many other things!




"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

© Copyright 2004 Kirah - All Rights Reserved
Nightshade
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1 posted 2004-04-13 04:34 PM


Love doesn't mean having to change for someone else....or die for them.
You will see when the true thing comes along.  hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Grover
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2 posted 2004-04-13 04:37 PM


Sounds like we may be in for some "therapy writing." As the old song goes, "...breaking up is hard to do." (even if you're the one doing the breaking) Thanks for sharing... I've been there too and I know how it feels.
WindSong
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3 posted 2004-04-13 05:02 PM


Thank you. I'm still a teen...17...so like I dunno...I felt that I didn't have a ring so I wasn't FORCED to stay in love with him...I did love him, but ya know how young hormones move...SWIFTLY!

Thank you both!

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2004-04-13 05:21 PM


Dear Song of the Wind, I would like to echo both Nightshade's and Grover's responses!

Kirah, I would like to add that I am so relieved that you extricated yourself from that "relationship" and remained intact! Now, it's onward and upward! Write that man right out of your hair! We'll be here for you, l'il darlin'!

Loves 'n healing hugs,
Linda

WindSong
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5 posted 2004-04-13 05:32 PM


Lol. he was a good guy actually...

"write that man right out of your hair"

sounds like as song "i'm gonna wash that man right outta my hair.." good stuff. thank you!

THANK YOU!!!

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

Margherita
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6 posted 2004-04-13 06:38 PM


Very good write.
The immense enthusiasm
fading
to quiet friendship.
Love, Margherita

WindSong
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7 posted 2004-04-13 08:37 PM


Yeah well some frienship it's turning out to be...he's being a weasel! (However you spell it) I just don't wanna deal with anything...thank you though.

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

vega
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8 posted 2004-04-14 08:04 AM


Love is something that I don't think I shall ever understand, it evokes so many different emotions. I do know one thing though, don't try to change who you are ,  the right person will love you for that very reason. Take care.....
WindSong
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9 posted 2004-04-14 09:08 AM


I think i'm gonna have to repost another poem..that i just posted recently...its entitled "...love..."

Mucho thankos. Everyone has such great opinions and it really makes me smile and brighten my rainy day. Thank you!

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

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10 posted 2004-04-14 09:08 AM


the best part about being young is that you get to be fickle and enjoy the company of many different kinds of boys It's all about learning what you like and don't like, so when you find "the one" you will know it's him
WindSong
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11 posted 2004-04-14 09:14 AM


That is so true. I never ever heard that. I think that's brilliant. I like it...lol. Thanks Sea...finally everyone understands...or maybe its just me...i dont know...

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

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