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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2004-04-13 12:19 PM



It remains~
untamed....
ten thousand oceans, of ache
unending waves of want
enduring the crush of hushed emotion

It remains~
echoes through my soul
reverberating reverence  
quivering upon lips
a whisper of your name

It remains~
embedded essence emanating
passion in timeless reminisce
soft sigh remembrance
never forgotten, that kiss

It remains~
adoration....
lifetimes, blissfully lost
heaven is
in your eyes

It remains~
ever constant, ebb and flow
destined devotion
always know
my love for you,

It remains~


~SEA~

© Copyright 2004 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-13 12:20 PM


YES!! YES!! YES!!  Welcome home!!
And, what a beautiful write you brought with you!
So good to read you again Susan!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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2 posted 2004-04-13 12:25 PM


Susan.........So good to see you!  Love is like that...the way you describe...wonderful!
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3 posted 2004-04-13 01:11 PM


SEA, your expression here was really well done.  Great poem!      jo
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4 posted 2004-04-13 01:14 PM


beautifully expressed , great to be reading your wonderful poetry again

Hope

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5 posted 2004-04-13 01:15 PM


Ah, Sea, I have missed your gentle words so much. Welcome home! hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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6 posted 2004-04-13 01:32 PM


SEA~
Okay little friendie gal .... this is absolutely silken~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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7 posted 2004-04-13 01:41 PM



It remains

that you are still
one of my favored poets...

Welcome home, Susan...

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8 posted 2004-04-13 01:44 PM


What a beautiful write! It flows so smoothly, it positively rolls off the tongue.

Good to read you again, SEA!

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9 posted 2004-04-13 02:38 PM




missed you!

(but don't worry, my aim's improving!)

Hope all is well in SEAland.

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10 posted 2004-04-13 02:48 PM


Your love, and your poetry, is as constant and strong as the SEA...

Congratulations on 16,000 posts, Sweet SEA!
Your poetry ebbs and flows like you yourself graciously do!

Congratulatory hugs,
EA ( That's SEA minus the S! lol)

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11 posted 2004-04-13 08:00 PM


Passionate...one of my favorites...James
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12 posted 2004-04-13 08:08 PM


stunning.....and congrats on 16,000
there is such peace within this...

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

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13 posted 2004-04-13 09:21 PM


So beautifully expressed SEA.

Congrats on 16,000

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

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14 posted 2004-04-13 09:59 PM


ten thousand oceans, of ache
unending waves of want

~~~~~~~~~~~
It remains~
embedded essence emanating

================================
oceans, ache, alliterations...
Im moth giddy!!!
very, very cool write Sea-girlie.
congrats on your milestone...so good to see you back in the blue.

Home is a feeling I buried in you ...
I'm alright, I'm alright ... It only hurts when I breathe ...

M.E.

SEA
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15 posted 2004-04-14 12:40 PM


wow, you guys are wonderful...thank you so much for the great replies....my muse has been gone for a while now, and I for one, hope he sticks around

and Kissy Face.... missed you too

and Janet, those alliterations were all for you!!

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16 posted 2004-04-14 05:08 AM


Oh my!  In she floats so softly on a sea of love and hope, gotta love it!  Nice to see you Susan, you are missed.  Life sure has a way of getting in our way doesn't it

Today I'm only moving clouds, tomorrow I'll try mountains.

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17 posted 2004-04-14 06:59 AM


so softly written, just gorgeous
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18 posted 2004-04-14 07:57 AM


Oh Susie...I feel the same about you too!....Oh, this wasn't about me?...Oh well, as long as it wasn't written to Balladeer I can accept the disappointment...nice write you good looking little doll you!!!
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19 posted 2004-04-14 08:36 PM


Sea,
   I enjoyed the grace of your poem.  Excellent.
                 Sade

Susan Caldwell
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20 posted 2004-04-14 08:40 PM


"It Remains"

Great title to a great poem.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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