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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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0 posted 2004-04-13 12:12 PM



I’m only a water drop
I know
I’m outside
the draw
I’m pulling
your thoughts aside

I follow your aim
my name is the same
I know of that shell
it’s you
I can tell

Reach to my edge
fluid and dread
you’ll feel instead
like falling
you’re dead

I’m bigger than you
this drop won’t lie
come enter my world
we’re  ALL - inside.

The next time you see
a water drop glide
will it be me?
or another
gone by

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

© Copyright 2004 mysticpoe - All Rights Reserved
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2004-04-13 12:52 PM


Very intriguing write.  Like this one a lot!
JL


iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-04-13 12:59 PM


Yes, I agree, very interesting perspective.  Enjoyed!
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just out of reach
3 posted 2004-04-13 01:19 PM


Very interesting write. Enjoyed. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
4 posted 2004-04-13 03:49 PM


so this is where all my fave dark ones have been hiding...all this time i thought you guys just ran out of ink! very nice one poe! catch you later

    - River

sleep my precious slumber

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-04-14 03:16 AM


cool
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