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Poetry of Gold
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Poetry of Gold |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Poetry of Gold My heart once again in high spirits, to see your poem stories told Written of themes hidden in your mind, and pondered in your soul In print for compelling exam, free, open, not one bought or sold. Translated, questioned, searched-out through each word and line Irresistible taste, tastes of rainbows, each color’s new rhyme, all painted flavors for the heart, opened eyes, and for pleasing the mind. Where do you find these words to mingle as gold dust so pure and so fine? How do you weave and stitch such beauty from a fabric not seen in its time? The sweetness in you wells up to its ebb, and then flows out gentle wined rhyme. If I could shield you from others who have not a care, if I might be so bold, but your reflections in poetry, is for all, even those careless need be told, so they too, can taste a rainbow, and be warmed, by your poetry of gold. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolutely stunning, warmth and a compatible look for someone who also loves poetry...enveloping the reader with a great sense of friendship...I felt as if I were clinking glasses with you while reading...lovely! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A very warm and sensitive write!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wow! This is a wonderful poem. I am going to start watching for your writings.  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What spectacular vintage! Fulfilling and wonderful write. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very much enjoyed the read JL!! 'Tis a keeper for my library. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
"taste a rainbow" ... love this imagery. Well done, hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JL~ 'Where do you find these words to mingle as gold dust so pure and so fine? How do you weave and stitch such beauty from a fabric not seen in its time? The sweetness in you wells up to its ebb, and then flows out gentle wined rhyme.' This is wonderful .....~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May I print it, frame it, hang it over my head? I would love to have my husband see this... treasure. Because it may not be how I write? But most certainly, JL, it is how I feel!!!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I do believe, that you yourself just wrote some "Poetry of Gold", dear poet! It takes a fine appreciation of the poetry of others to be able to write fine poetry one's self!  This was simply golden! ~ May your days be filled with sunlight ~ and your nights with starlight dreams. EA |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Lovely sentiments, nicely written. I agree. It is a treasure to be able to read so many fine pieces by so many talented people. Thanks for sharing. Susan  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow! I am overwhelmed with the wonderful replies. This is indeed dedicated to all poets everywhere. But the true motivation for the words came from several writers and poets whom I have had the pleasure to read their writings, here and on other sites as well. Inspiration for this is from Lee J, Rene (Zippi), and Bonnie J. However, I must admit the talent on this site is very motivating. Sunshine, yes, by all means copy, and print. I am honored, thanks. JL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wonderful tribute! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Gee my friend I thought I left a reply yesterday. Guess not. Brain not working well. This is another one that is so beautiful and touches me deeply. I'm one that is an inspiration...COOL! Hugs coming your way from Ohio Bon-Bon  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
JL...This poem just blew me away. Such refreshing words to read. I truly believe we draw our inspiration from each other and I know this will inspire many. Thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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vega Junior Member
since 2004-04-12
Posts 24wherever I lay my hat. |
Soooooooooooo beautiful, warm and full of feeling. Loved it ..well done..Take care... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your words are woven with the finest gold thread to create a most beautiful tapestry for us all to admire. Thank you for sharing your talent. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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