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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2004-04-13 07:54 AM



+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+
My home is a place of magic,
Where other realms you'll often see,
With angels and fairies fluttering about,
While old spirits simply be.

Red roses climbing trellises,
English ivies climb walls of brick,
Sweet Williams fill the country air,
With their perfume thick.

White Lily of the Valley,
Line my garden walks,
And all along the picket fences,
Grow colourful hollyhocks.

Lush topiary bushes,
Lend to the mysteries,
Of the mazes and the labyrinths,
Among the ancient trees.

Following the summer showers,
Bands of light crown my home
With a myriad of colours,
In a celestial rainbow dome.

Blue Bells ring the wishing wells,
Birds splash in marble baths,
Bull frogs croak on lily pads,
Cute bunnies hop garden paths.

Wind chimes tinkle softly,
In the salty Celtic breeze,
As Mother Moon smiles upon,
All that of which She sees.

The sounds one hears in mid of night,
Should never cause you fear,
For they're the voices of the dead,
Reminding us they're here.

Crystal wands and essences,
Healing herbs and scented oils,
All gathered from our Mother Earth's,
Divine and giving soils.

Father Sun warms days with sunshine,
Twinkling stars span ebon skies,
Welcome to my magic world
~ A mystical paradise.
+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+

© Copyright 2004 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
muted
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1 posted 2004-04-13 08:03 AM


does that mean we will be having tea at your place then?

soooo pretty, I want to be there! LOL, but was happy to visit it in my mind

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-04-13 08:33 AM


Following summer showers,
Bands of light crown my home
With a myriad of colours,
In a celestial rainbow dome.

This entire poem was filled with extremely visual explosions of life, magic and love.  Incredibly written....thank you for sharing.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-04-13 08:37 AM


Linda....OH Linda!!  This is Magical!!
And you know I have to love it!!
May I keep it?  I'll tuck it away carefully..
to read to the fairies later.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

scorpio
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4 posted 2004-04-13 08:38 AM


Magic indeed.

believe in what your heart feels...

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5 posted 2004-04-13 09:37 AM


Such a beautiful magical world...
Thank you for letting me spend a few moments in it...

I have always wondered why the term "halcion days" is even used... Have you ever taken Halcion? I have once when I got my wisdom teeth pulled and I still cannot remember anything about 18 or so hours after taking it. Hmmm, go figure...

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6 posted 2004-04-13 10:24 AM


SweetEarthyOne~
Totally mesmerizing imagery~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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7 posted 2004-04-13 01:29 PM


muted ~

Oh, please do join me in the gazebo for a fresh brew of fairy dew tea!

Happy Springtime hugs,
EA

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8 posted 2004-04-13 01:30 PM


Lee ~

Now coming from you, dear master of writing imagery, that is saying a mouthful! Thank you!

Have a day that is full of magical happenings!


Linda

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9 posted 2004-04-13 01:34 PM


Nancy ~

Oh, yes, Dear Enchanting One! I knew that this poem would appeal to you! I'm honoured that you wish to keep it. I have just now made several changes to better the flow, so you may want to save this edited version.

Magical, mystical wishums,
Linda

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10 posted 2004-04-13 01:36 PM


scorpio ~

Magic is in the air! ~ 'Cause it's springtime!

Springy hugs,
EA

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11 posted 2004-04-13 01:37 PM


s_o_o ~

~ and I thank you! Love those lazy, hazy days of summer! ~ and without the use of drugs! lol

Warm hugs 'n smiles,
EA

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12 posted 2004-04-13 01:41 PM


Lady Marge ~

Why thank you very much! I just rewrote several stanzas so that they hopefully flow more smoothly. I wrote it during the mid of nite when I was a wee bit sleepy and discombobulated!

May your day be filled with mystical magic! ~ or magical mysticism!

Huggums,
EO

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13 posted 2004-04-13 03:09 PM


man last again on a wonderful piece...i suck at this reply first thing..oh well very well done

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

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14 posted 2004-04-13 03:12 PM


a lovely place Linda, thank you for sharing with us.
Earth Angel
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15 posted 2004-04-13 03:14 PM


Fiery Flake From Hades ~

lol Never fear! Take your time replying! You just brought my sinking poem back into the light of day! Thank you!

Warm hugs & a special smile,
Earthy Angel

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16 posted 2004-04-13 03:16 PM


Donna ~

Mi casa es su casa! Come join me whenever you feel the need for some peace and quiet!

Huggums,
Linda

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17 posted 2004-04-13 04:03 PM


That was awesome! It's what I needed today. It's very relaxing and peaceful sounding. Spectacular writing! I loved it!


I'm back! I had issues to deal with but I'm back!

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2004-04-13 04:11 PM


WindSong ~

Seeing your name just blew a gentle wind through my tresses and put a song in my heart! I am glad you were able to deal with your issues and that you are back among your kindred spirits!

Thank you for your enthusiastic response to my poem. That even made my smile grow even wider!

Big, warm, welcome-back-home huggums,
Linda

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19 posted 2004-04-13 04:20 PM


Lol...Well I work in mysterious ways...I'm glad to be back. *huggles* Peace..

<3 always, kirah

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

Margherita
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20 posted 2004-04-13 04:45 PM


The sounds one hears in mid of night,
Should never cause you fear,
For they're the voices of the dead,
Reminding us they're here.


Dear Linda, the above verse reminded me of my Grandmother ... sometimes I heard knocking sounds when I was a child and my Grandmother told me that those were the souls asking for a prayer ... I can't help, but whenever I hear similar sounds I say a prayer.

Your mystical Paradise is a very charming place, dear Linda.
So beautiful!
Love and hugs. Margherita

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2004-04-13 04:48 PM


WindSong ~

Ah, yes, Dear Kirah! I remember! You do work in mysterious ways!

Love & Light,
Linda

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2004-04-13 04:50 PM


Margherita ~

Thank you for sharing that story about your grandfather. I find it comforting when my deceased relatives make their presence known.

I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem.


Linda

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