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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-04-13 07:33 AM


Of Mushrooms

I’ve grown a mushroom of a kind
Within the flotsam of my mind
Sortie it with a sense of seem
And spiced it with desires dream

I’ve plucked the heartstrings hidden lie
And let the notes to fly and sigh
Into the air of worlds naive
In colors that I do believe

They’ve left the nest to do their best
To wonder in this world of test
Waiting for a perch of kind
Waiting for an open mind

And that is when I’ll drink my fill
With naught of payment, naught of bill
But touch upon a hearts receive
For all the things that I believe

I live the heart of dreamer’s status
And give my mushrooms to you gratis


© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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1 posted 2004-04-13 07:37 AM


and you can tell by my garbage poetry, that I've graciously excepted alot of mushrooms in my time....gratis....

This is an interesting write sigh....as everything you write seems to be....now, how about a pillow case full of them mushrooms boy....I need some motivation to write something sweet about old Bally....

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-04-13 08:30 AM


They’ve left the nest to do their best
To wonder in this world of test
Waiting for a perch of kind
Waiting for an open mind

wonderfully written...very much enjoyed this first thing Tues Morning...hiya Sy, hope your Easter was excellent.

Hugs...Lee J.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-04-13 08:33 AM


Morning my guy Sy!
Very interesting write you leave for us this dreary morn.
I feel as though I had too many mushrooms on my pizza.
How about a hot cup of Chai tea with me?
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

scorpio
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4 posted 2004-04-13 08:42 AM


Enjoyed your poem this morning Sy.  

believe in what your heart feels...

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2004-04-13 10:03 AM


And that is when I’ll drink my fill
With naught of payment, naught of bill
But touch upon a hearts receive
For all the things that I believe

I live the heart of dreamer’s status
And give my mushrooms to you gratis


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I'm grinning like the chesire cat at your words from wonderland.
Love your rhyme scheme dreams Sy babes.


I’ve plucked the heartstrings hidden lie
And let the notes to fly and sigh



you do...Oh yes you do!!!

fairies and dragons believe in mushroom magic....
they know thats where *winkies* come from. *L*  


*ww*


Martie
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6 posted 2004-04-13 11:33 AM


Sy

"I’ve plucked the heartstrings hidden lie
And let the notes to fly and sigh
Into the air of worlds naive
In colors that I do believe"

Yes, you have...daily, and I'm glad that you do!  

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2004-04-13 01:58 PM


Magical mornin', m'dear Mr. T.!

~ I dare to dream of the wonders that are yet to be discovered in the mushroom recesses of thy fertile mind. As thy notions fly, may they fill up mine open mind with thy colourful images and messages divine.

In return, Sir Sonneteer, I grant thee three wishes!

Angel hugs & birdie kisses,
EA

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8 posted 2004-04-13 02:23 PM


Hi Seymour,
Very good poem, as always.
Hugs  
Ethel

Sunshine
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9 posted 2004-04-13 02:26 PM



I've been sauteing this little nugget all morning...in rich butter with a hint of garlic...

and I keep being drawn back to it.  Must be because it has four or five more lessons woven within....

Thank you, Sir Troubadour...

passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-04-14 03:17 AM


you can write about just about anything and make it sound good
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2004-04-14 07:48 AM


Toe,
The mushroom you would need is Peyote. But I would not advise it LOL.

LeeJ
My dear friend, everything is as it should be.

Nancy,
I'd love some tea.

scorpio
Enjoyed your enjoyment.

JM
And for you I have a bag full of mushrooms.
WWRS

Martie
And I'm always so happy to see you. Hugs

Earth Angel,
Well you have my first wish.
Your health wealth and well being. Hugs

Ethel,
Thank you my dear.

Sunshine
Your sunshine lights up the poem. Hugs

passing  
You are the kindest of kind. Hugs

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2004-04-14 01:27 PM


My dear, sweet, charitable Mr. T., for you using your first wish on me, I shall grant you three more wishes! Magic Wand

Love & Light,
EA
Fairy

iliana
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13 posted 2004-04-15 03:00 AM


I was never a mushroom lover until now!
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2004-04-15 07:53 AM


iliana
You are the sweetest.

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