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swatcatpettus
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0 posted 2004-04-12 10:16 PM


smoking the only facts of reality,
getting high, on poverty, on corruption,
death seems, it seems realiable, only as a last resort though,
never an option considerable while there are others,
the human drive corrupts me, and you too you know,
find the key, the pick, whatever can open this door, this door of non-reality,

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-04-12 10:19 PM


swatcatpettus
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2004-04-12 11:21 PM


Perhaps slim thoughts, but high ideals simply shift our fingers higher to the sky
Your verse resounds and beckons response...a healthy sign despite the reality of smoking.
TD

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-04-13 02:40 AM


only as a last resort
Dark Angel
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4 posted 2004-04-13 04:59 AM


Interesting thoughts.

enjoyed

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

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