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0 posted 2004-04-12 03:23 PM





© Copyright 2004 Dawn van Krieken-Smith - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-12 03:29 PM


This is beautiful Dawn.
You have such an ease with words.
hugs, Chris


thankyou so much for being so attentive during this Moderation - I have to put this swollen foot up every once in awhile, so I haven't always been available here.

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2 posted 2004-04-12 03:34 PM


Empty hands are not deplete,
You have an angel's face
You have a child that has his mother's looks,
You've been blessed with grace....

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3 posted 2004-04-12 03:35 PM


Chris, you keep those sore tootsies elevated...and i feel even with the complication of a hurt foot...you are doing a mighty fine job moderating! Thank you  

Toerag!! you slipped in there...you sweetie! almost brought me to tears...thank you

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4 posted 2004-04-12 03:57 PM


How wonderful and full these words of the bravest heart.  Bravo.
TD

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5 posted 2004-04-12 03:57 PM


Very nice!
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6 posted 2004-04-12 03:59 PM


Very beautiful!  Great write.
JL

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7 posted 2004-04-12 04:16 PM


Profound write, accompanied by the perfect picture!  I really like this.
        Sadie

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8 posted 2004-04-12 05:34 PM


PERFECT!

Keeping this.

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

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9 posted 2004-04-12 06:17 PM


Wow! That is just so cool!


Eric

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10 posted 2004-04-12 06:32 PM


Fantastic Dawn!!  Straight into my library with this gem!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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11 posted 2004-04-12 09:04 PM


"exposed the roots of wisdom grown"
Very powerful line, love the poem....
______ice
  ><>

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12 posted 2004-04-12 09:28 PM


Exceptionally poetic, however, dear poetess, you hold the wisdom of a sage and many blessings in thy empty hands!

Love & Light,
Linda

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13 posted 2004-04-12 10:47 PM


just love the way you write
going to have to add this to my collection.

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14 posted 2004-04-13 01:33 AM



thanks you guys, your comments mean more to me than you realize

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15 posted 2004-04-13 02:32 AM


beautiful! I have no other word
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16 posted 2004-04-13 05:22 PM


Well, young lady,  you shine!

It's empty hands that capture the most precious gifts.

Love, Margherita

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17 posted 2004-04-13 07:08 PM


A soul full and soulfull...

you see the world -- and touch the world

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18 posted 2004-04-14 09:55 AM


dear...in understanding

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

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19 posted 2004-04-14 10:25 AM


lovely and compassionate heart you have...a wonderful write
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20 posted 2004-04-14 10:33 AM


to all of you for all of the support you give

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21 posted 2004-04-14 10:58 AM


empty hands can mean
you are poised and ready
  to hold the world

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22 posted 2004-04-14 11:02 AM


Wow!  Dawn, you have said so much in so few words and have stirred up so many feelings. And, these images you have been posting are jsut incredible.... ~P
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