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THEMAGICALMYSTRYOFPOEMS
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0 posted 2004-04-12 12:49 PM



FOR THE MOMENT

I am missing something
I need

I am doing the best
That I can

Anything can happen now
You changed my world
My way of thought

Walls I put up
Are falling around me
No answers for this
Just a mystery

I want to run
But I can't move

I don't know
What is true

I am like a shadow
Lost in this world


© Copyright 2004 Marilyn Ciptak - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-12 01:08 PM



Often many of us tend to feel a bit "lost in this world", but with determination and support of those who care...we will find ourselves. Very nice first post, Im looking forward to reading more. (Please check your email for a special PIP greeting)

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2 posted 2004-04-12 01:12 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your opening post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

JL
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3 posted 2004-04-12 01:13 PM


“I am like a shadow
Lost in the world”

A beautifully descriptive verse.  I Like this poem a lot!  Great write!
JL


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4 posted 2004-04-12 02:10 PM


Marilyn~

Welcome to the Passionate circle of PiP~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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just out of reach
5 posted 2004-04-12 02:22 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Enjoyed your first post!
Have fun here.
hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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6 posted 2004-04-12 02:50 PM


May such a moment pass and may all your needs be identified and met!

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

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7 posted 2004-04-12 04:17 PM


Hello... welcome to PIP!!!  
LeeJ
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8 posted 2004-04-13 11:36 AM


well, hello there and sending forth a great welcome...very much enjoyed reading you.
iliana
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9 posted 2004-04-13 12:54 PM


Wecome to Passions!  Enjoyed your first post.  
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10 posted 2004-04-13 12:55 PM


I sure can relate
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11 posted 2004-04-13 02:30 PM


Welcome to Passions!  I hope you enjoy your time here as many of us have come to know this as our home...and we appreciate all who wish to join our family.

If you have any questions, or need assistance, please do not hesitate to contact a moderator of your choice.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...

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