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Gunslinger
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0 posted 2004-04-12 02:27 AM



Could it be that we belong together?
Could it be that it's written in the stars?
Could it be that we are meant to love forever?
Could tenderness remain beneath the scars?

I cannot help but wonder what attracts us?
You a youth, and me, a gray wolf growing old...
Could it be, although there never be a meeting-
That our love could be the one of purest gold?

Could it be that I'm a rock for you to lean on?
Could it be that you are my refreshing stream?
Could it be we're counterparts intended-
To be the source and substance of a dream?

All these questions, and at least a million others-
Tantalize my thoughts by night and day.
Dare I dream that they're reciprocated?
Could it be that you can fathom what I say?

© Copyright 2004 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-04-12 02:53 AM


perhaps....I hope so...it sounds like it's what you want
bbent
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2 posted 2004-04-12 02:58 AM


nothing like just laying it out there.a heartfelt write,moved me.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
3 posted 2004-04-12 11:20 AM


It's the heart muscle that moves mountains.
scorpio
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right...there
4 posted 2004-04-12 12:25 PM


Powerfully written John.  And very moving.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-04-12 12:31 PM


You should always dare to dream cowboy.
Love this keeper.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
6 posted 2004-04-12 01:21 PM


Great poem Gunslinger!
JL


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7 posted 2004-04-13 11:59 AM


"Could it be that we belong together?
Could it be that it's written in the stars?
Could it be that we are meant to love forever?
Could tenderness remain beneath the scars?"

always a pleasure to read you

iliana
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8 posted 2004-04-13 01:13 PM


Good to read you again, Gunslinger.  This was a great poem!    
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