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Open Poetry #31

You Are Right

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-04-11 06:47 PM

You Are Right

you don’t
know me at all
I am more
one step forward
and 2 steps back
but amazing things
are happening
and if I
walk there alone
I will leave you
behind

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

1 posted 2004-04-11 06:54 PM

Lives cross, braid, unbraid and move on along separate paths. It is the way.

Enjoyment is to understand the braid.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2004-04-11 06:56 PM

ice you know and understand me WAY too well...love you...helen

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-04-11 09:26 PM

yes, it is the way

good write H

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2004-04-12 02:03 PM

Wow...!!

Eric

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2004-04-12 04:23 PM

Yes, you do walk the walk. Another brilliant perspective from your pen, Slick Lady!

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