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DavePage
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0 posted 04-11-2004 03:38 PM       View Profile for DavePage   Email DavePage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for DavePage


Emerald Kicking sand
into a forgotten place
to remember when beauty
was something to plan
On a mindful image

knowing
you chose
somewhere
away
knowing
exploring
an end to others who sought
to use you for

images
In a Summer you watched the world fail

to find you with
your long hair
and smile

but will the world wait as it did before

and leave your rough trees
old wall
haven

rented

for your heart

and peace
© Copyright 2004 Dave Page - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 04-11-2004 03:49 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Dave, your poem intrigues me.  What is the background behind it?  I so enjoy reading your work.  
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2 posted 04-11-2004 04:28 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Yes, I would like to know about this piece as well. Enjoyed. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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3 posted 04-11-2004 05:06 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

would like some understanding too...why is the title cut off at the beginning?
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4 posted 04-11-2004 08:44 PM       View Profile for froggy   Email froggy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for froggy

I'm with the others on this one.
This is one interesting poem.
I enjoy reading your poetry.

:-)

Froggy
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Dave?
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Yeah Dave, what's the liner made of in this package?
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interesting

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interesting

DavePage
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9 posted 04-23-2004 05:20 PM       View Profile for DavePage   Email DavePage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DavePage

It obviously sounds a bit stupid to say I dont write on the site when I do read the poetry and manners make me respond at least to finish off the comments on my writting.

Manners means I respond to those who commented on the words I have written, and that is what I am doing.

Dave
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The background is fading beauty, someone who wanted to take a break;  to get off the world and let it spin around without her.

Just going somewhere and enjoying isolation but someone who hadn't lost themselves in the adoration.

She knew she would drift into penniless begging or be dragged back into someone else controlling her life.

There is no known person in these words.

Dave

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Thanks for your explanation, Dave.  Now it makes a lot of sense to me and enjoyed it even more.  
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enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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