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froggy
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0 posted 2004-04-11 02:46 AM



Before I leave
I wanted to say......
Within my heart
you are there
and I love you
More today
Then yesterday.

And when things start
To get tough
I look within,
find you there.

Before I leave
I wanted you to know…..
How much I love you
So.

© Copyright 2004 E.Griswold - All Rights Reserved
aujussy wolf
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1 posted 2004-04-11 02:59 AM


Sweetness should be your middle name
cute poem froggy
-wolfy

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-04-11 04:42 AM


sounds a bit like me here
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2004-04-11 10:40 AM


Such gentle purity should be applauded as deserved.
TD

iliana
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4 posted 2004-04-11 11:23 AM


froggy -- this was such a sweet, gentle piece.  I hope this person realizes the truth.  
Bonnie j
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5 posted 2004-04-11 12:16 PM


Soft, gentle words you share.
Thank you
Bon-Bon

froggy
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6 posted 2004-04-11 08:31 PM


aujussy wolf - Thank-you for the sweet comment.

passing shadows- Thank-you for the nice comment too.

ThisDiamond-Thank-you for the nice comment as well.

iliana- Thank-you for the sweet comment.

Bonnie j- Thank-you for the sweet comment too.

Thank-you all for sweet and wonderful complements.

:-)

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