Open Poetry #31 |
Repetitive in Color or in Black and White (whichever you prefer) |
Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
a desert sunset giving way to magnificant arrays of color, the brightest reds, darkest greys, even the unseen hue of violet. white horses are in abundance reflecting all they pass the sand blows them away. the majestic, royal blues fizz like carbonation, they breed with yellow and make forest green so this is no longer a desert but now haunted pines.. you can see the frost, and the rain's sweet vapor burns in your nose and has an aquired taste as most things do... the horses still glide through the scenery, reappearing and disappearing existing and not existing all at once, remember the importance of the horses. the colors inbred, eventually turn to black.. we are now in a land unknown, wailing and faulty instruments scream in Wagners awkward chords and violins burn ..as most things do. the horses glide backwards and say I love you but it means nothing in this place, and colors cannot resurface and disjoin.. so we are stuck here. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kaoru, this was a brilliant write (but I hope not true). I have always enjoyed the music of your poetry. .......jo |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
the majestic, royal blues fizz like carbonation, they breed with yellow and make forest green so this is no longer a desert but now haunted pines.. You define angst and brilliant beauty all in one. Those lines are outstanding in their origionality...everyones origional, in their own way, but no one could ever/has ever said things in the way that you just have with such natural flow. Sometimes i feel like what i'm writing has been said before, but yours really never has. and i'm jealous! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic write Meg! Very very much enjopyed. Have a wonderful Easter.. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm coming back for a re-read of this later, Meghan...but I wanted to say, "Welcome Home"...and have a blessed Easter morning. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Meghan~ A brilliant penning in layered colors of thought~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!! Eric |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
how did anyone manage to find words to say after reading that...im speachless Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hi Meg...how are you doing....I've missed reading you...this one was incredible, as all of yours are...how do you do it? Nice to see you kiddo, keep em coming |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Another WOW I am definitely adding you to my favs list |
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