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misao
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Have you ever
seen life as your enemy
you count the days as they go by
wishing your life would end
you think to yourself--
whats my point in living
why am I here?
Have you ever
gazed up at the sky
and thought--
I want to be like that star
alone, melancholy, and beautiful
Have you ever
saw yourself as someone perfect
dreaming of the day
when you get to change yourself
Have you ever
made the wrong decision
you say its a big deal
but its just an accident
Have you ever
turned your back on love
you broke someones heart
while yours wasnt damaged at all
and you thought of yourself
as a cruel person
Have you ever
just hated yourself?........
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passing shadows
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1 posted 04-10-2004 05:12 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

yeah
Nightshade
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2 posted 04-10-2004 05:20 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Have never hated myself....disliked myself and was disappointed in myself...but that's normal isnt' it?  Happy Easter!! Chris
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 04-10-2004 06:44 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Misao~
This is full of thoughts that many have,
but don't express as well as you have done~

But this -

'Have you ever
gazed up at the sky
and thought--
I want to be like that star
alone, melancholy, and beautiful'


- is very unique creative thinking~


Hoping to cheer you up just a little~

Happy Easter celebration to you and yours~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Grover
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4 posted 04-10-2004 07:37 PM       View Profile for Grover   Email Grover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Grover's Home Page   View IP for Grover

You've posed some interesting questions. You've delved into some dark corners and brought light into them. Very nice work!  
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5 posted 04-10-2004 11:31 PM       View Profile for aujussy wolf   Email aujussy wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aujussy wolf

awesome job , i am moved by this , struck a note ...ty
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6 posted 04-15-2004 08:29 PM       View Profile for MGROVES   Email MGROVES   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MGROVES

know the feeling but i never hated myself, just dissapointed for being such a fool at times, and angry for not doing what i should, angry for allowing others to inflict their pain on me. wanting to bury my head in the sand but never want to stop living, hell i have'nt even begun to live thanks for sharing and making me think

serenity blaze
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7 posted 04-17-2004 01:52 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

sometimes I wish you were LESS like me:

"Have you ever
just hated yourself?........"

smile.

I know we have a poet's truce here.

But I think the mom takes over from at this point...





Write about everything--just as we talk about everything--k?

I love you.
GG
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8 posted 04-17-2004 02:42 AM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

Yeah...
*sigh*

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Dark Angel
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9 posted 04-17-2004 07:39 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Many times

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

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10 posted 09-23-2013 01:14 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Good to read this again.  Love the "comment."
 
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