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misao Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 50 |
Have you ever seen life as your enemy you count the days as they go by wishing your life would end you think to yourself-- whats my point in living why am I here? Have you ever gazed up at the sky and thought-- I want to be like that star alone, melancholy, and beautiful Have you ever saw yourself as someone perfect dreaming of the day when you get to change yourself Have you ever made the wrong decision you say its a big deal but its just an accident Have you ever turned your back on love you broke someones heart while yours wasnt damaged at all and you thought of yourself as a cruel person Have you ever just hated yourself?........ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Have never hated myself....disliked myself and was disappointed in myself...but that's normal isnt' it? Happy Easter!! Chris |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Misao~ This is full of thoughts that many have, but don't express as well as you have done~ But this - 'Have you ever gazed up at the sky and thought-- I want to be like that star alone, melancholy, and beautiful' - is very unique creative thinking~  Hoping to cheer you up just a little~   Happy Easter celebration to you and yours~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
You've posed some interesting questions. You've delved into some dark corners and brought light into them. Very nice work!  |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
awesome job , i am moved by this , struck a note ...ty wolf |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
know the feeling but i never hated myself, just dissapointed for being such a fool at times, and angry for not doing what i should, angry for allowing others to inflict their pain on me. wanting to bury my head in the sand but never want to stop living, hell i have'nt even begun to live thanks for sharing and making me think |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sometimes I wish you were LESS like me: "Have you ever just hated yourself?........" smile. I know we have a poet's truce here. But I think the mom takes over from at this point...   Write about everything--just as we talk about everything--k? I love you. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Yeah... *sigh* Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Many times  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Good to read this again. Love the "comment." |
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