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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2004-04-10 10:34 AM

A simple plan against you

to avoid skin

and graceful eyes

that could catch any pupil

and open it wide

for

one

last

look.

And so

simple

becomes

complicated,

with the gentle way

you touch my bones

bringing surrender in marrow,

by how you softened

and did not break them.

You held my spine

with caress

and I held back

a sigh.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-04-10 10:42 AM

Gemma~
Well, I'm not holdiing back my *sigh*~
This is loverly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

2 posted 2004-04-10 11:15 AM

oh my this is soo good gem
you do passion so well ....
soooo hotttt oh myyy

woof woof wolfy
lol and hugs

.......
JDW III

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2004-04-10 01:30 PM

Your best, well one of, this just flows beautifully

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

4 posted 2004-04-10 01:36 PM

you are amazing

gorgeous!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-04-10 02:24 PM

"and I held back
a sigh"

wow

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-04-10 03:27 PM

What a delicious poem!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2004-04-10 05:29 PM

Oh, now this one made me shiver. Love it!!
Happy Easter! Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

8 posted 2004-04-11 12:56 PM

Mmm...missed this.. muchly.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

9 posted 2004-04-11 01:03 AM

"A simple plan against you

to avoid skin

and graceful eyes

that could catch any pupil

and open it wide

for

one

last

look."

and.....

"You held my spine

with caress

and I held back

a sigh."

Gem...What can I say that I don't say everytime I read you? Truly an amazing write...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2004-04-11 09:35 AM

You held my spine

with caress

and I held back

a sigh.

Wow... this reeeaalllly touched me Gem.

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

11 posted 2004-04-11 10:02 AM

Thanks so much..I really enjoyed writing this, and your replies make it all that much more enjoyable.

Thanks for reading...appreciate you all.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

12 posted 2004-04-11 02:55 PM

A nice feel to this as all your words.

have miseed them.

good to read you again *S

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2004-04-11 08:00 PM

enjoyed

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