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Lassitudes

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 04-10-2004 07:38 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

stars in sighs and fingertips
clawing
in the win-ter-ger

everything
I
once
dreamt of

digging

for a dry WASP ditch...

just a little bit of it--

itty bitty bitey bitch

Lassitudes
and longing too...
damn I need to be sixteen.

Wax the lips and pout--

agree?

cover curl the yellowing

of the smile of her defeat

laughing

through the laze...


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Giving laissez faire
to all...

Good morning, midiK...
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serenity  
Woukd not we all.
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Morning serene one ! Awesome. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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stars in sighs and fingertips


ya had me from the very first line.
dont wanna be sixteen again tho...was hard enough the first time.

Home is a feeling I buried in you ...
I'm alright, I'm alright ... It only hurts when I breathe ...

M.E.

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"Wax the lips and pout--

agree?"

Agree!!
Gawd you are so amazing!
Love ya lady~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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"Wax the lips and pout"

Too true -- awesome poem!
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stars in sighs and fingertips

YESSssss...beautiful Gorgeous..beautiful.

Mxx

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

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sometimes you are hard to grasp, but I still love the way you write
serenity blaze
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Thanks for reading.

You guys are great, and sorry about this one being confusing, I tend to make up words sometimes...Lassitudes?

It's just a term I use for "female sass".

Sheesh.

Thanks again...

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nice
Janet Marie
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Doing the birthday bump from me library of rhyme divine Sen keepers.
Its your day..the forums shall be your marquee
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Always love reading your stuff...
Although,
I am sixteen,
and?
in case you've forgotten,
it isn't all it's (ahem) cracked up to be.


Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
                  Joyce kilmer

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13 posted 07-11-2004 03:54 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze



perhaps I should re-write this one as "assitudes"?



Hugs Alyssa.
 
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