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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-04-09 10:26 PM

Distance

every morning
looking in the mirror
I recognize
the face I see
who I
do not recognize
is you
the one who
talks to me
of friendship
and what it is
and could be
my buddy
who wants
my time
yet, tells me
to wait
this is just
too tangled
and you are
wrapped up in
something you
can not let go of
and really
the only thing
between us
is distance

"It's ok, you will be alright, it will just take some time." unknown

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-04-09 10:29 PM

"and you are
wrapped up in
something you
can not let go of
and really
the only thing
between us
is distance"

Excellent Helen....much enjoyed.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2004-04-09 10:34 PM

mucho agree with the above...

jwesley

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-04-10 05:34 AM

straight to the point

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2004-04-10 12:26 PM

You never disappoint. Never. I like that about you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-04-10 06:27 PM

OneSlick~
Sometimes distance is a good thing, eh ?~

Happy Easter celebrations to you and yours~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2004-04-11 12:54 PM

Oooh.. sighs and hugs.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-04-11 01:00 AM

Helen, you are so good at expressing yourself!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2004-04-11 08:16 PM

enjoyed

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

9 posted 2004-04-12 01:59 AM

kryponite, as usual.

that was one hell of a closing. it felt strange reading this, it was like eavesdropping on someone "breaking up" with a friend - if that makes sense.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2004-04-12 01:16 PM

Very nice!
JL

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2004-04-13 11:05 AM

Yes... the chord of familiarity resonates within me with this read. *S* Excellent! *S*

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

12 posted 2004-04-13 11:17 AM

I especially like the double meaning at the end-- one can be very close in distance to another, yet still be very distanced. Another exceptional write!

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