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Temptation
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Temptation |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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Temptation Oh sighing wind, rapping at my window Do not beckon or call my name Can you not see, the latch is set Against your subtle queries Blow no longer, pass away And leave me linger in peace again S.A.T. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice Susan. Enjoyed. Chris Happy Easter!! Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Yep. I liked it. Reminded me of the Raven tap, tap, tapping.. Hey, like the name to!  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Nice one susan. -Juju |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Short, sweet, and the brevity bites... Well done, Susan. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Right to the point... an excellent write. Enjoyed!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nice Susan. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I liked this |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very nice, enjoyed |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good writing, Susan. I enjoyed. Hugs, Ethel |
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