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What Never Was (blues song)
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What Never Was (blues song) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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What Never Was It's five O'clock in the morning first night alone's crept by me the curtains on this open window flutter in the morning breeze I stare out at the dim lit street gazing through a misty rain thinkin about why we went our separate ways Chorus: we got caught up in each other wonderin where our future'd go two lonely souls together hiding in each others hope searching for that magic feeling some call the one and only love an we fooled ourselves believing we would find what never was... In two more hours I leave this room fade into the working day I'll always remember you but things'll never be the same Still I wish I could hold you one more time to fill the space you left behind in my mind and in this empty place. Chorus: we got caught up in each other wonderin where our future'd go two lonely souls together hiding in each others hope searching for that magic feeling some call the one and only love an we fooled ourselves believing we would find what never was... Bridge: We were looking for answers that heal lonely minds Living love cliches that only speak of passing time Chorus: we got caught up in each other wonderin where our future'd go two lonely souls together hiding in each others hope searching for that magic feeling some call one and only love an we fooled ourselves believing we would find what never was Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
gulp I was up at 5AM too emoting in blue |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome Lovely lyrics almost sang to me. Good write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And the music, Eric? Mid-tempo, slow and low? I want to hear it... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
great song to listen to as the sun comes up and the loneliness of the night ends |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Only a full life citizen could write these lyrics and have them be so real. Smiles from TD |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ET~ You *sigh* this music right into my soul~ 'Still I wish I could hold you one more time to fill the space you left behind in my mind and in this empty place.' Oh yes~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Liked the poem a lot -- would love to hear the music that goes with it! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
spectacular!  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Midnite for relating and for goodness sake, get some sleep.....LOL Thanks Sy for taking the time to read this and comment. Sunshine I'm working on that now and will post when I have it available. Thanks for dropping in to read this. Hi MGROVES and thanks for going there and waking up with this piece. Hey TD if you could see my big belly then you'd realize how accurate you are by using the term "full life citizen". I thank you for the kind remarks. Hey Marge it's always good to hear from you and even better to reach your soul. Thanks for the kind words and the hug. iliana thanks for reading this and as I mentioned, I will post this when I have the music to it. Dixie thanks for such a wonderful superlative this early in the morning. I appreciate the thought. Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
ethome...Sounds like a hit to me. Put a little Blusey soul music to it it let it fly.Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it  |
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