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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
it's hard for me to trust after all i've been through i opened my heart took a chance on you i spoke of the pain that's deep inside you saw the tears i always hide some of the time we shared i could feel you really cared then came the fear a feeling within i knew i should of ran as it was happening again just what did i do i wish i knew to do to me as others did before i even let you touch me where no one could our souls embraced as one's should never again my heart and soul bound with chains from the tears within |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Melancholy piece very well expressed. I really like the ending. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A very good write, Marsha!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there are people in this world that you can trust...please don't close up |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Sad. I understand the feelings of this write, and I know that it is possible to move beyond the fear and find joy. It begins by loving and accepting yourself. And it is a never ending task, or so it seems, but worth the effort. Susan |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your all too kind thanks |
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