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0 posted 2004-04-09 08:19 AM



i see the sadness
in your eyes
i feel the pain
your heart cries
don't ever feel
you can't talk to me
open up
you can trust, just see



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1 posted 2004-04-09 08:33 AM


A lovely thought indeed.  Hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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2 posted 2004-04-09 08:41 AM


MGROVES
Enjoyed the read.


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3 posted 2004-04-09 11:24 AM


thankyou, thinking of passingshadows, along with my significant other whose life seems to be crashing down on him. oh well what comes around goes around. not you dix


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4 posted 2004-04-09 10:11 PM


cool one groves

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5 posted 2004-04-10 05:30 AM


I knew when I read this before I even scrolled down to read the replies here that this was for me

you are always in my heart...you are beautiful

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6 posted 2004-04-10 09:47 AM


My sister was one of those people you could turn to no matter what was going on in your life. Over the years she became a TRUE friend. She was a good listener, she did not judge or hand out opinions. She had a knack to understanding. I miss my sis. Sometimes I wish I could pick up the phone and give her a call.Sometimes I wonder if this is the reason I began to write so late in my life.
Good poem
Love Bon-Bon

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thankyou , i started writing late too, it really helps getting the pain and lonliness out. a very good way to express just how you feel, especially when no one listens.
you all listen and understand, you dont how much appreciated it. thanks from my heart


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8 posted 2004-04-10 07:18 PM


Marsha, you're writing such beautiful poetry! God bless you!
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9 posted 2004-04-10 09:02 PM


MGROVES...Many time the pain of others is our pain also. It takes a gentle heart to care about others. Thanks for having a gentle heart...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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