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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA 
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futility . slipping helplessly on life’s banana peels landing flat on your back only to gaze at imageless faces gawking at your misfortune thru eyes dimmed by inured transgressions inflicted thru blatant bigotry striving to envenom the most resolute disposition . Enotneicna SLW 2-16-04 Words are my medicine. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
endeavor to never allow the venom to envelope your spirit namaste |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
absolutely never!!! Words are my medicine. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
well done but depressing. one thing that did annoy me was "thru." i just do not see the point, it is not as if through has more syllables or is that much longer. such e-slang bothers me. -majnu |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
interesting observation and philosophy |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
Majnu......I have always used Thru....long before it was considered e-slang!!!!!! sorry if it bothers you!!!! passing shadows......that's what I thought when it popped into my head and screamed......WRITE ME!!!........lol!!!! Words are my medicine. |
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