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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2004-04-08 11:20 PM



If I was a bubble would you love me?
Wonder...
would you pop me or set me free.

If I was a small humming bird
Would I be the one you Adore?
Wonder...
would you want more or just explore

If I was a candy would you enjoy?
wonder...
Would you share me or protect me.

Tell me what kind of man would you be?
-Juju

Auhg.... couldn't rhyme last one but its all cool lol!

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Sadelite
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1 posted 2004-04-08 11:26 PM


Juju,
   Creative thinking and very cute!
                  Sadie

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
2 posted 2004-04-09 04:55 PM


Ayh thanks, This one, when reading it to day I see has horrible flow. That is pretty bad for me. Oh well. I am kinda going through a little writers block.... well I can't write as well as usual. I apolagize.  Oh well.

Love Juju

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