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pammy
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0 posted 2004-04-08 10:34 PM


"This Torture"

The times have changed,
but the story remains the same,
A broken heart, a broken friendship,
and the sound of your name,
still makes me cry.

We were the best of friends,
and I always said i would love you 'til the end.
But now everything has changed.
You've hurt me so many times,
I dont deserve the pain and the lies.
You told me you were sorry and that it wouldn't happen again,
But everytime you were angry, you took it out on me.
Too many fights and hurtful workds,
there's so much pain inside,
Every curse and agonizing word,
Is tearing me apart. This torture.

You knew my worst fear,
and you made it come true,
You say to me you care, and you want to fix these things,
but sometimes i doubt you really care.
There are two things i cant understand,
like what it is i have done.
And can you please tell me how it could be so easy,
to throw away a relationship that has lasted nearly 3 years.
This is by far the worst thing to happen in my life,
and i didnt know that the person who brought me so much love and joy,
could turn it into hate and anger.
could turn the tears of happiness,
to tears of misery. Its torture.

© Copyright 2004 Pamela Elizabeth! - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-08 10:57 PM


pammy - then it is a good thing that this "torture" has come to an end. You have written your feelings well. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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2 posted 2004-04-09 07:11 AM


i know exactly how you feel. i live in the same nightmare get the same torture mine has been 13 years. hope you find a way out sounds like you have a good heart that deserves better  good luck marsha


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