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Crimson Moon
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since 2003-07-21
Posts 52
NY, USA

0 posted 2004-04-08 09:55 PM




You don't have to be here
I'm not holding you captive
You don't need to tell me
Everything's alright
That's my line

I'm just fine
Always laughing or growling
I'm only tired
No fear or pain anywhere
The perfect girl

Hard working
All open arms and ears
I only want your joy
Can't you see that
I'm your jester

You can't hurt me
No one can
I'm not broken
I can't be
It's against your desire

I'm the perfect female
Warm and giving
Needing nothing from you
Wanting only your desires
Your perfect fuel

So go ahead
Fuel yourself
Use every part of me
Perhaps someday you'll notice
The tanks already on E


I was a poet once and now I flounder in shallow water searching for my lost voice.

© Copyright 2004 Noël Woodley - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-04-08 10:28 PM


oh, how sad!
but a good write, Crimson

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
2 posted 2004-04-09 05:06 PM


I diddo midnightsun.

Juju

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
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3 posted 2004-04-09 05:42 PM


Since this poem is running on empty. Come on over here and I'll fill your tank with premium gasoline so you can write us another interesting poem.
See Ya
Bon-Bon

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
4 posted 2004-04-09 07:33 PM


Very nice. Sad, but very well written!
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-04-10 05:38 AM


gawd! I love you
iliana
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6 posted 2004-04-10 03:38 PM


Crimson Moon -- perfect satire!  Good writing.  Hang in there.  
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