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Open Poetry #31

Rented for your heart

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-04-08 05:46 PM

Emerald Kicking sand in a forgotten place when beauty was something to remember you to plan

On a mindful image
knowing
you chose
somewhere away knowing and exploring an end to others who sought to use you for images

In a Summer you watched the world fail to find you with your long hair and smile

but will the world wait as it did before

I hope for you

They wait

and leave to your rough trees
old wall
and haven

rented

for your heart

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2004-04-08 05:49 PM

hmm.. eerily fantastical...

a delight to read. i shall read it again

CONFUCIOUS SAY: YOU STAND ON TOILET, YOU HIGH ON POT!

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-04-08 05:54 PM

Reality say

Stand too high, you crack things

thanks

Dave

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2004-04-08 05:59 PM

Very interesting use of metaphors Dave.

I like your exploratory thinking.

Eric.

Eric say: You fall off pot you flush faced....

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-04-08 07:51 PM

Like it

thanks for the other words

Dave

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-04-26 03:01 AM

Even better!

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